帮忙纠正这篇关于"小猫钓鱼"故事的英语作文(初一版)

关键字：小猫钓鱼，英语，作文 更新时间：2018-03-13 15:03:52 165次访问

以下是我自己写的(各方面还很不完善),请大家帮忙纠正,使其成为完美的作文.

Mother Cat and Baby Cat are go fishing. Suddenly a bird coming.She feel very happy.The Baby Cat is going to catch the bird. But she can't catch the bird. Because she feel very sad. She feel happy again because there is a butterfly coming.And she is going to catch the butterfly.She can't catch the butterfly.She don't have a fish and she feel very sad.

以上是我写的,"小猫钓鱼"大家都知道吧,结尾的他没钓到鱼怎么用英语写?
另外帮我指导下我的英语作文!Mother Cat and Baby Cat （go） fishing. Suddenly a bird (comes).She (feels) very happy.The Baby Cat is going to catch the bird. But she can't catch the bird. (So) she feel very sad. She (feels) happy again because there is a butterfly (comes).And she is going to catch the butterfly.She can't catch the butterfly.(At last, the cat can't catch any fish)

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